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Saturday, April 11, 2020

ICE CREAM FOR SALE !!!

Ice cream! Ice cream! Ice cream for cats!!

The ice cream for cats is new, I made it yesterday it took a long time because I had to test it to my cat a lot of times and finally I made one he likes. It is vanilla flavour with jellymeat and tuna swirl topped with some crunchy Temptations! I'm sure your cat's going to love it!

 Order now. $20.99/2L tub. If you are the first 5 to order you will get it for free.
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 11, 2020 at 11:05 AM

    Hi Vincent, great writing. I like the way you have made it sound like an advertisement with your persuasive language. I think my cat Bell would love this ice cream.
    Mrs Roach

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  2. Olivia GillApril 11, 2020 at 12:53 PM

    Hi Vincent, what a persuasive ad - you have made the reader want to buy the cat ice cream, and if I had a cat I would definitely be buying it.
    Happy Easter. Miss Gill.

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