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Wednesday, April 8, 2020
THE KITE
I went to MacFarlane park yesterday and played with my kite. First it didn't fly but when I had a few more goes it flew so high, higher then the clouds. 😉 It was awesome.
The kite's the colour Green and Blue. The LOOOOONG string has flappy decorations in White, Blue and Green. On the top diamond part there's a mark that looks like the youtube sign as shown above
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Well done Vincent, what is the design and colours of your kite? Can you explain this further in your writing. See if you can add more information to your post.
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Hi Miss Gill
ReplyDeleteI have added some more information about the kite.
Well done Vincent, I can now picture what your kite looks like.
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ReplyDeleteHi Vincent
ReplyDeleteWhat a great blog! The blue and green kite looks so cool 😃
nice
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