hello my name is Vincent and I have been working on an animals slide with my friend Ollie we hope you like it
what should we improve on?
Tuesday, May 11, 2021
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Hi vincent its tayla,
ReplyDeleteI like your slide the animals are so cute but maybe next time you could vocuse on the information and not consentrate on the backround with the animals.